[MD] poetry commentary

[Heather Perella]

    The renga poem is terrific.  It's interesting how
the longer it gets, the more the attention goes from
this to that to one thing to the next thing.  It is
the same as me looking around wandering across the
earth attentive to what's along the way.  It's
definitely not a lack in focus for the subtle scopes
are wonderful.  A forest full of differences with
changes pulling one along in interest.  I don't see
separate poems, but one poem with on-going changes. 
I'm on a virtual walk as I read the poem.


out of the hemlocks, it is brighter 
SA

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