[MD] Posting in Dynamic Quality Format

MarshaV valkyr at att.net
Fri Jun 17 07:26:50 PDT 2011


Hi Mark,

I write everyday in a journal.  And I think what you suggest is a 
great idea, but this does not seem a safe place to be open.  
Even you, who are one of the gentler and more creative 
posters, thought nothing of blowing off my attempt to speak of 
gender.  -  Guess I got a little bit touchy.  

I miss the story-tellers.   If you have a story to share, I'd love to 
hear it.   


Marsha   


On Jun 14, 2011, at 3:50 PM, MarshaV wrote:

> 
> Dear Markarulia,
> 
> You must be joking. Gender is never a non-issue: it may swing in a
> positive direction or a negative direction, but it is never a non-issue.   
> I write to my lover every day.  Do you think for one moment I would 
> share with you?  
> 
> 
> Yes, all in good fun.  No harm, no foul.  
> 
> Cheers,
>     Marsha 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> On Jun 14, 2011, at 3:37 PM, 118 wrote:
> 
>> Hi All,
>> It has been said that communication through writing lies within the
>> realm of static quality.  Certainly it can be said that it is based on
>> Subject/Object grammar.  How then do we point to dynamic quality,
>> without getting stuck in these circular discussions which only point
>> towards themselves?
>> 
>> I propose that there is a method in writing which is based on Dynamic
>> Quality.  In fact there are many methods being used today with such a
>> basis.  Train of thought, or automatic writing is one of those.  Often
>> I have to read my posts after I have written them to see what I said.
>> In this way writing is more like talking in the present tense, in the
>> moment.
>> 
>> So, what does this look like when we are relating something that
>> happened in the past?  Well, we must remember that things that
>> happened in the past were happening in the present at one time.  By
>> present I mean that infinitesimal (non-existent) fraction of time that
>> we live in.  In order to explain this, I will use an example that has
>> nothing to do with MoQ, since that is much more difficult.  I will
>> choose the following sentence written in standard past-tense grammar,
>> and convert it to dynamic quality format.
>> 
>> "The lovestruck man swam across the cold river to be with his expectant lover."
>> 
>> OK with that?  Now here is the Dynamic Quality Format:
>> 
>> "Feeling alone and despondent, the intensity of desire was building.
>> Each step brought him closer to that object of his desire until he was
>> met by a cold river which presented a barrier.  Yet, his wanting
>> pushed him forward.  As he entered, the cold began to travel up his
>> body until he was completely free of suffocating heat.  Arm over arm
>> he entered into a mesmerized state where each moment was unique and
>> separate from the previous.  He had no idea how long he was in this
>> state, but found himself surfacing at the shore, and the spellbinding
>> cold was replaced slowly with heat once more.  This much closer, he
>> moved slowly towards that which he sought in order to satisfy the
>> longing which had held him for so long.  This was the woman who was
>> expecting him."
>> 
>> So, why do I call this "writing in Dynamic Quality format"?  It is
>> simply because as one read this, everything is opening up to the
>> reader as happening in the moment.  The subjects and objects are
>> revealed as they happen.  It is not until the end of the sentence that
>> the beginning is defined.  This is the way life works if we live in
>> the dynamic moment.  Each moment defines those that occurred
>> previously.
>> 
>> Give it a try and see what you guys come up with!
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> Mark



 
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