[MD] Posting in Dynamic Quality Format
MarshaV
valkyr at att.net
Fri Jun 17 07:26:50 PDT 2011
Hi Mark,
I write everyday in a journal. And I think what you suggest is a
great idea, but this does not seem a safe place to be open.
Even you, who are one of the gentler and more creative
posters, thought nothing of blowing off my attempt to speak of
gender. - Guess I got a little bit touchy.
I miss the story-tellers. If you have a story to share, I'd love to
hear it.
Marsha
On Jun 14, 2011, at 3:50 PM, MarshaV wrote:
>
> Dear Markarulia,
>
> You must be joking. Gender is never a non-issue: it may swing in a
> positive direction or a negative direction, but it is never a non-issue.
> I write to my lover every day. Do you think for one moment I would
> share with you?
>
>
> Yes, all in good fun. No harm, no foul.
>
> Cheers,
> Marsha
>
>
>
>
> On Jun 14, 2011, at 3:37 PM, 118 wrote:
>
>> Hi All,
>> It has been said that communication through writing lies within the
>> realm of static quality. Certainly it can be said that it is based on
>> Subject/Object grammar. How then do we point to dynamic quality,
>> without getting stuck in these circular discussions which only point
>> towards themselves?
>>
>> I propose that there is a method in writing which is based on Dynamic
>> Quality. In fact there are many methods being used today with such a
>> basis. Train of thought, or automatic writing is one of those. Often
>> I have to read my posts after I have written them to see what I said.
>> In this way writing is more like talking in the present tense, in the
>> moment.
>>
>> So, what does this look like when we are relating something that
>> happened in the past? Well, we must remember that things that
>> happened in the past were happening in the present at one time. By
>> present I mean that infinitesimal (non-existent) fraction of time that
>> we live in. In order to explain this, I will use an example that has
>> nothing to do with MoQ, since that is much more difficult. I will
>> choose the following sentence written in standard past-tense grammar,
>> and convert it to dynamic quality format.
>>
>> "The lovestruck man swam across the cold river to be with his expectant lover."
>>
>> OK with that? Now here is the Dynamic Quality Format:
>>
>> "Feeling alone and despondent, the intensity of desire was building.
>> Each step brought him closer to that object of his desire until he was
>> met by a cold river which presented a barrier. Yet, his wanting
>> pushed him forward. As he entered, the cold began to travel up his
>> body until he was completely free of suffocating heat. Arm over arm
>> he entered into a mesmerized state where each moment was unique and
>> separate from the previous. He had no idea how long he was in this
>> state, but found himself surfacing at the shore, and the spellbinding
>> cold was replaced slowly with heat once more. This much closer, he
>> moved slowly towards that which he sought in order to satisfy the
>> longing which had held him for so long. This was the woman who was
>> expecting him."
>>
>> So, why do I call this "writing in Dynamic Quality format"? It is
>> simply because as one read this, everything is opening up to the
>> reader as happening in the moment. The subjects and objects are
>> revealed as they happen. It is not until the end of the sentence that
>> the beginning is defined. This is the way life works if we live in
>> the dynamic moment. Each moment defines those that occurred
>> previously.
>>
>> Give it a try and see what you guys come up with!
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Mark
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